The table illustrates the proportions ofpeople across different age categories who rode bicycles in one particular townin 2012.
introduction:對題干進行改寫 percentage->proportion; age group->different age categories
Overall, the table clearly shows that ahigher proportion of females cycled in the given period compared to malesacross all ages. This group (0-9 yrs.) had the largest proportion of cyclists,and age was a clear predictor for decreased cycling activity for both males andfemales, with the exception of the oldest age group (60+), which bucked thistrend.
Turning to the figures, just over half ofall young girls and boys aged 0-9 years rode bikes in the town, with 52.5% and51.2% respectively, amounting to the smallest gender gap of any age group. Incontrast, 43.6% of 10-19 year old girls chose to ride bikes, while only 25.1%of boys did the same. This pattern continued with the 20-39 age group, with18.2% of young women cycling compared to 10.8% of young men.
body paragraph 1(直接按年齡順序進行描述):
1、0-9歲的女孩和男孩有一半以上騎自行車,并給出數據。并且是所有年齡組中最小的性別差距,體現出對比邏輯;
2、10-19歲和20-39歲的年齡組數據模式相似,騎自行車的女孩比男孩多。
The gender differences were lesssignificant in middle aged cyclists (40-59), with 13.7% (female) and 9.3%(male). Finally, the over 60s reversed this trend with more cyclists than theprevious two age groups, with 19.8% and 14.6% respectively for females andmales.
body paragraph 2:
1、中年騎車者(40-59歲)的性別差異不太明顯,給出數據。
2、60歲以上的人扭轉了這一趨勢,騎自行車的人多于前兩個年齡組,并給出數據。